Jun. 4th, 2010

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I've joined [livejournal.com profile] tamingthemuse recently, and in addition to weekly prompts, they're also doing monthly prompts. This month's prompt is to pick your favorite poem and to write a 1,000+ word story. As what will not come as a shock to anyone who knows me well, I've chosen "The Highwayman" by Alfred Noyes. I have adored this poem ever since I first read it in my literature class in seventh grade. What might be surprising is that I won't be focusing on either the Highwayman or Bess. Instead, I'm going to work from the point-of-view of Tim, the ostler.

Dark in the dark old inn-yard a stable-wicket creaked
Where Tim, the ostler listened--his face was white and peaked--
His eyes were hollows of madness, his hair like mouldy hay,
But he loved the landlord's daughter--
The landlord's black-eyed daughter;

It is never explicitly stated, but it is certainly heavily implied that it is Tim who tells King George's men where to find the robber. It's pretty much a cut and dried case of obsession, and I hope that I can tell the story from Tim's POV without making him out to be someone who should be pitied. Then again, I don't want to go overboard and make him even more vilified than he already is. Noyes did a perfect job of that with just one stanza (the lines I quoted are the only mention of Tim). (Also, I find it curious that Loreena McKennitt leaves this stanza out of her beautiful rendition of this poem.)

Anyway, I hope that I can pull this off and that I'll be posting this story to [livejournal.com profile] tamingthemuse soon.

And the next post will be about schmoopy Sam stuff and life stuff.

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