Look, I wrote something (sucky)!

[jadedmusings]

Title: Karl's Introduction
Rating/Warning: PG
Word Count: 1,724 words
Author's Notes: I figured out a long time ago that if I ever get around to telling Selene's story, there will need to be two books. The first will cover her life in Shadow and how it is she became so powerful there. The second book would cover what happened/would have happened in the Aria campaign I used her in last. That means the second book would introduce Karl, someone who is the focus of some of my Selene drabbles/stories. This is the very first and very rough draft of what could be his possible introduction. I have an idea for an introduction for Madoc, and then of course Selene's story. Seems I might be splitting my time writing both books, just doing what I can to write whenever inspiration hits. (Discipline? What's that?) Anyway, here you go. I need to work a lot on the dialogue, but this was more of a case of "Let me get this out while it's in my head" and I will be building on it from there...eventually. Yeah, needs a lot of work, but I'm not going to get better unless I practice.

(Fake cut to my writing journal. No, you are under no obligation to read.)

Comments

[demonicgerbil.livejournal.com]

Don't know why you say it sucks. It's okay and it gets the job done. The dialogue reads pretty find to me, too.

[demonicgerbil.livejournal.com]

...fine even

[jadedissola.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading and commenting. Means a lot. And as far as the dialog goes, it's more of it doesn't read like I hear it in my head, if that makes sense? I guess it's one of those it's only noticeable to me deals. I just want to fiddle around with some of it is all.